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Foosball Haiku 5

My ears rang and I deafened.
I felt my hands shake.
But still my eyes saw nothing.

Eli has one wicked shot.

Some comments...

  • That's right... I shot harder than "Al Iafrate":http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Al_Iafrate, and I don't even have a mullet!

    Eli says:

  • Your haiku is wrong.
    Format is 5, 7, 5;
    Commendable, though.

    Jordan says:

  • You, good sir, are wrong.
    My poetry validates.
    What are you, a newb?

    Kyle says:

  • You sir, are the newb
    I cite wikipedia:
    You should read this link:

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku

    Jordan says:

  • Actually, Mr Kyle is correct.

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English

    :D

    Mr J says:

Sorry, comments now closed :(